An unsuspecting victim
to my voices of treason;
ignored the dictum,
renounced all reason...
Clouding my awareness,
was darkness in the valley;
strange haunting darkness,
looking to stab me in the alley...
to my voices of treason;
ignored the dictum,
renounced all reason...
Clouding my awareness,
was darkness in the valley;
strange haunting darkness,
looking to stab me in the alley...
voices of treason - head; dictum - heart; reason - truth; awareness - desire; valley - brain; alley - life.
8 comments:
My favorite bit is "An unsuspecting victim to my voices of treason." I like the way it rolls off the tongue... good rhythm and vivid choice of words.
@ isis panthea
Thank you. appreciate the effort and certainly the words of praise :)
@ cyser
Thanks. Flukes happen :). Do drop by.
@seashells
nice rhymes...
@isis panthea
i'm totally with you... i just realized that besides being intelluctually challenged, i'm also artistically challenged... i wonder if i should apply for a handicapped parking tag... :D
@ fosix
if you need someone to co-sign your application, i'd be glad to do it for you...
@ isis panthea
Sweetie, by addressing that comment to self, you just proved that you belong... :P
thanks for the metaphor glossary at the bottom.....with that help I think i actually liked ur poem :)
@ second wind
You're welcome. The most regular reader of this blog complains that she never understands any of these... So, I tried to make it easier... I'm glad you think you like it :)
@ Isis Panthea
I'll co-sign you too :P
Au contraire, the glossary got me confused! :p
@ searchinformrmojorising
ain't it easy to ignore ???
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