THE NIGHT IS MY HAVEN, MY SANCTUARY; IT CRADLES MY MUSE, MY VIGOR, MY SANGUINITY.
WHEN THEE AFTER DUSK COMETH LOOKING FOR ME, I REFLECT UPON THEE THAT'D COMETH ONTO ME.

The Fellowship

Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Love actually!

Our love
was like fiction
in the making.
You, a fountain pen.
I, a blank sheet.
You wanted to
doodle a magical web.
I was being
myself - blotting paper.
Together, we were disaster.

24 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well, sometimes it's no one's fault :-)

Trevor Penn said...

@ Agnes
Wow! that was lightning fast reaction time! And, well yes, it ain't nobody's fault. :-)

Talking To My Soul said...

Damn it. That's tragic.


*cheers*

Crouching Tigress said...

That sucks.

Anu Russell said...

nice one! You should try ball point pen next time...better choice :)

Trevor Penn said...

@ Soul
Not so tragic in retrospect. I survived. :-)

Trevor Penn said...

@ Tigress
I'm guessing you ain't talking about the post. ;-)

Trevor Penn said...

@ ARTie
Lesson learned, ARTie. :-)

Pinku said...

I dont know whether to laugh or feel sad...somethings are just not meant to be together though they are perfectly fine otherwise.

Good luck with finding someone more compatible..

Trevor Penn said...

@ Pinku
It's OK to laugh. I know i am!:-)
Thanks for the wishes!

Keshi said...

but isnt pen and paper the most useful pair of all? :)

Keshi.

Trevor Penn said...

@ Keshi
Yes, they are, Keshi. Hence the simile.

But there ain't a pen that works on all paper and vice versa.

Chronicler said...

dont know what to say.. subtly put words there...

rashi_pratibimb said...

:)Oh my my!! dreams met reality huh??

Trevor Penn said...

@ swayam
It's perfectly alright to not say a thing. I know i get that way all the time. :-)

Trevor Penn said...

@ rashi
For once, this was all real. No fiction.

Anonymous said...

eh? just remember to recycle the paper. :D

rashi_pratibimb said...

Oh!! was that the survival all abt???
No worries! just let go...:)

Btw, the split-personality PART-I has been missing for aeons now!! :P

Trevor Penn said...

@ renaye
That's the secret to survival.

Trevor Penn said...

@ rashi
Ofcourse, i've let go. How else would i survive? :-)
My alter-ego has been at bay because of an extremely busy work schedule. Will see you soon though. :-)

ChAsMeBadDoOr said...

sorry 2 hear the disastrous love story but must say u potrayed it well with ur words;)

BTW thanx 4 dropping by my blog.. stay in touch :)and huh if this pic is urs then i wud love to say.. U OWn CUTE PUPPIES :)

Trevor Penn said...

@ chasmebadoor
Thank you. Yes, that IS me in the profile pic but the pups aren't mine.:-(

ChAsMeBadDoOr said...

ohw sad 2 hear that... m a dog lover.. actualy no. am animal lover[:)]

~vagabond~ said...

This is written so well. I couldnt help laugh at the end of it. Nicely done! :)