"Too fast" says a friend mine, but there's no stopping the hands of time while i set sail with the sands of time. Fighting all reason eye-for-eye, i'm trying to not let love pass me by. I tire by sunrise... and fall into the lap of paradise... With shut eyes i still can see, your haloed glow that surrounds me. But that tear in your moist eyes, maims my heart and leaves me paralyzed.
In a moment my senses are zapped, i'm transported to hell's gate from paradise. Floating in the mire of secrets of your heart is the wreckage of many broken dreams... i'm here to be the gentle light that shoos away the dark night.... but i'm only a flicker; careless words can undo me... only careless words can undo me...
In a moment my senses are zapped, i'm transported to hell's gate from paradise. Floating in the mire of secrets of your heart is the wreckage of many broken dreams... i'm here to be the gentle light that shoos away the dark night.... but i'm only a flicker; careless words can undo me... only careless words can undo me...
13 comments:
woah! your posts are really getting more and more mysterious. I love the way you play with words. But honestly I have no clue what you are talking about :))
Nice ! You tried real hard not to write another poem, didn't you ? It still sounds like poetry to me :)
@ m(tsu)
i tend to get too metaphoric but i just went with the flow... the whole thing is a build up to the last line... it is the essence... those words speak the reason.
@ smitha
hehehe... No, that's not exactly it... what i did is to not try to make a poem out of it... which i think i could have done with relative ease in this case...
@ isis panthea
thanks sweetie. this is more of a note-to-self. warning myself that i need to toughen up.
ento ra...nee raata naaku eppatiki ardham kaadu
ur totally lost aren't u, no track of neither date nor time, just plain simply lost:)
I AM SORRY....for putting you thru this.....
Lol! If you've noticed (and I'm sure you haven't!), I don't comment here anymore. I CAN'T! I no longer know what to say. M is right! You're getting too mysterious. And I thought the next post I'll find here will be happy and mushy after we spoke on Orkut. Well, it's time...don't you think? ;)
@ anonymous1
one fine day kanna... one fine day you will have your epiphany..
@ apple
NO. Are my tenses that confused ???
@ anonymous2
and... who might you be ??? :P
@ truth fairy
You bet, i've noticed... but i can't hold you at gun point for not commenting, can i ??? :P ... since all of you are raising such a hue and cry, i shall TRY to avoid mysterious posts... can't promise to be mushy though... hehehe... happy ??? sure... Happy Singh be i.
agree with M nd TF..u gotto be back with the happy stuff..its not all that bad....
@ fallenangel
aye aye...
Let me also thrown in some suggestions. It's more to do with this dark template :) Firstly it's hard on the eyes, next it gives you dark, melancholic and abstract ideas.
am glad so many feel like me. was thnking i'm the only one here who failed to see the obvious :))
@ smitha
Are you implying that my blog is gothic ??? hehehehe... seriously though... will have to wait for another 6 months before i can do anything about it... i try to use bigger font sizes.. i hope that has helped...
@ m(tsu)
oh c'mon... give yourself some credit and a pat on the back while you're at it... hehehe..
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