bas ek pal hi mila tha jeene ke liye
dekh unhein hanste, hum bhi muskuraliye
wahi pal mein hum ek dastaan likh gaye
dil mein unki apni pehchaan chod gaye...
ek andhiyaari raat ko roshan karne ke liye
kisi jugnoo ki tarah hum jalte chale gaye
ek pal ka aashiyaan dhoondhne jab chale
bhatakti raahon mein khote chale gaye...
phir ek titli ke dikhaye raah pe chal diye
baharon mein khushiyan batorte chale gaye
karz rahi yeh khushiyan jeewan bhar ke liye
lutate rahe apni jaan, woh chukta karne ke liye.
dekh unhein hanste, hum bhi muskuraliye
wahi pal mein hum ek dastaan likh gaye
dil mein unki apni pehchaan chod gaye...
ek andhiyaari raat ko roshan karne ke liye
kisi jugnoo ki tarah hum jalte chale gaye
ek pal ka aashiyaan dhoondhne jab chale
bhatakti raahon mein khote chale gaye...
phir ek titli ke dikhaye raah pe chal diye
baharon mein khushiyan batorte chale gaye
karz rahi yeh khushiyan jeewan bhar ke liye
lutate rahe apni jaan, woh chukta karne ke liye.
23 comments:
har aahat pe teri talaash hai,
door hokar bhi tu mere paas hai,
na yaad hume itna aao ke,
hamara dil humse puchhe ke dhadkan kiske paas hai...
hey nice scientific blog :)
n yeah nice lines there !
@ fallenangel
awesome lines...
happens to be my very first attempt at writing anything original in hindi... i have a long way to go... :)
@ white forest
"scientific" blog ??? heheh... whatever led you to that inference... color me intrigued... thanks for the appreciation and all feedback is always welcome. do come back. :)
not bad... toh ab aap shaya bhi ho gaye... pooch sakti hoon kisne di aapko yeh pankthiyan likhne ki prerna.... n i hope u dont mind but it shud be ek pal "ka" ashiyan
bahut khoob...
i never though u cud write so well :)
lol..kidding..nice one!
Just in continution with your lines....:)
Kho ke bhi tumhe, jahaan ko paa liya
Is pal mein saath na sahi, agle pal ka intezaar hai
teri yaad mein ek pal nahi
hazaron pal qurbaan hain
Read the post. But my rusty broken hindi would never do justice to such beautiful lines. Therefore, had to keep from saying anything at all.
@ anu
poocho poocho... par bataunga sirf sahi time aane pe... :P
i was playing around with 'ka', 'ke' and 'ki' in my head... perhaps you saw the 'ki' version of that line... :D
@ isis panthea
thank u... thank u... :)
@ second wind
hehehehe... dhanyawaad...
@ neha
well... i'm glad to have proven you wrong :P... Thank you. How're u doing ? Still blues n greys ? i hope not. :)
@ rashi
Hey 'n welcome here... niiice addition... :) Thanks.
find anything worth a read in my archives ??? ;) do come back.
@ m(tsu)
hehehehe... This is a completely new genere for me... my very first attempt... i'm not sure if i'm any good at this but your comments (and all others') make me feel worthy of a pat on the back...
You deserve more than a pat on the back. Trust me on that. Here's to more from you.
wah wah wah...kya baat hai!
beautifully written!!!
didn't u cud write so well in hindi as well
knew u cud always speak well :) (in hindi i mean... n this has been a long time coming... glad u made a begining :)
@ m(tsu)
hehehe.. thanks... you're being generous with the praise...
@ anu russell
seems like a while since you've been here... no more bloghopping from office eh ??? will buzz u on gtalk sometime...
@ anon
Thank you sweetie... you fell for my trap :P
@ anu
nah nah... writing in hindi is not as easy... im pretty convinced this was a fluke...
Man I can't write in my co-mother tongue(Kannada) or in Hindi! I wish I could write in Urdu though...
@ crouching tigress
What's your other co-mother tongue ? Don't you think your french supersedes Urdu ???
Duh ENGLISH!
Of course it does. I can write some stuff in French. But my grasp of Urdu aint pathetic. Also, I have known Urdu a lot longer than French.
Nice....
waiting....
@ crouching tigress
can you write the Urdu script as well ???
@ perspective Inc.
thanks :)
@ anu russell
did you check your email like i asked you to do on orkut ?
I did...and did you check my reply?
Still Waiting...
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