I loved my poison,
i loved it sweet...
what's lost is forgotten
in a heartbeat...
The second scent
is only a whiff
the second shot
is but a chance
the second glance
is a final twist
to a tale as hazy
as morning mist.
the second word
does the trick
you need no sword
when words prick...
my second wish
is death's kiss
to all my dish
that went amiss...
my second turn
at an awaited tryst
guarantees an ending
so very crisp.
PS: and that is post # 100 :)
i loved it sweet...
what's lost is forgotten
in a heartbeat...
The second scent
is only a whiff
the second shot
is but a chance
the second glance
is a final twist
to a tale as hazy
as morning mist.
the second word
does the trick
you need no sword
when words prick...
my second wish
is death's kiss
to all my dish
that went amiss...
my second turn
at an awaited tryst
guarantees an ending
so very crisp.
PS: and that is post # 100 :)
11 comments:
"what's lost is forgotten
in a heartbeat..."
Is it, really?
BTW congrats on your century! Good job!!
Loved it! And congrats on the century. :)
Ah-mazingly Awe-some!
Congrats!
@ m(tsu)
YES, it is. you've to wait for that heartbeat though... and, thanks :)
@ truth fairy
thanks and double it :)
@ anu russell
LOL, was just telling someone last night that im not happy with it but this is all i can come up with for now... hold your words of praise, coz i'll better this one for sure :)
Ave Centurion Shellulus Aquarius Maximus !! :P
tats a good way to play a century...congratulations.
I wish what's lost was forgotten that quick...sigh
@ isis panthea
ah, you just needed an excuse, didn't you... :)
@ fosix
hard to keep dramatix away from fosix, eh ??? :)
@ second wind
not out and going strong... looking to rack up a huge score here :)
"you've to wait for that heartbeat though" How long? And isn't that what a heartbeat supposed to be? Gone in a heartbeat? I mean unless someone is in cardiac arrest or something. I would think it would take a really long time to forget something lost. if at all you can forget!
But don't get me wrong. I absolutely loved the words.
@ m(tsu)
Here's what happens or rather happened to me. People (I) tend to hold on to memories of bygones; baggage as they call it. It feels like those moments will haunt you for life... But if you're fortunate, there will come an instance of clarity when you'll forgive and foget all in a HEARTBEAT. It's amazing how the past ceases to linger. In a heartbeat, i've learnt to live today and have t'row to look up to. It's all happened in a HEARTBEAT.
okay I'll take your word for it. Me...have a hard time forgetting :(
@ m(tsu)
All BAD things will be forgotten in GOOD time. Cheer up now. :)
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